verazelinski:

neverfearsmithiswriting:

veronicaroyce:

Quick Guide to Punctuating Dialogue

“This is a line of dialogue,” she said.

“This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a speech tag.”

“This is a full sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence.”

“This is a sentence followed by an action.” He smiled. “They’re separate sentences, because I didn’t speak by smiling.”

We need an extended post covering ALL sentences.

*cracks knuckles*

(anyone, feel free to correct me if I’ve made any errors, and add your own!)


      “This is a phrase”—she was glaring at the computer—”she wrote while glaring at the computer.”

      “This phrase—” she paused, pointing at the computer “—she broke up with an action.”

      She began, “I can’t believe that you would—”
      “—finish other people’s sentences?” he finished.

      “It is generally not possible to walk a sentence,” she said, walking, “so you can’t write a sentence that goes, ‘Blah blah blah, he walked.’ You need to start it as a different sentence or phrase, as with the final OP example or, in fact, this one.
      “Also, at least in American punctuation practices, single quotes are used when quoting something in dialogue. In British punctuation, it’s the other way around. (At least that I’m aware of).
      “Also, also, notice that in multi-paragraph quotes, you don’t put an end-quote at the end of a paragraph unless it’s the final one. It is understood that each paragraph is still the same speaker.”

      “Just because you end a quote in an exclamation point or question mark doesn’t mean you capitalize the dialogue tag after the fact!?” he blurted.

      “Not all dialogue needs dialogue tags so long as you know who is speaking!”
      “Can you sometimes know who is speaking just by turn-of-phrase, subject matter, and names used?”
      “Yes, other person in the scene. You can.”

      It is highly dependent on publisher and personal preference, he thought, but various types of internal monologues and memories, etc, may be italicized.
    
But they don’t have to be italicized, she mused.
     And to that, she said to herself, ‘Sometimes thoughts or memories or telepathic speech are even written with single or double quotes, but must be differentiated between actual dialogue somehow, such as italic text.’

     And guess what? he said. Some books don’t even use quotation marks
when people say things. It’s rare, but when done well, is an effective
style of story-telling.
     Really?
     Really.

Punctuation help in case anyone besides me needs it.

Words to replace said, except this actually helps

champion-ofthe-sun:

imagines–assemble:

msocasey:

I got pretty fed up with looking for words to replace said because they weren’t sorted in a way I could easily use/find them for the right time. So I did some myself.

IN RESPONSE TO
Acknowledged
Answered
Protested

INPUT/JOIN CONVERSATION/ASK
Added
Implored
Inquired
Insisted
Proposed
Queried
Questioned
Recommended
Testified

GUILTY/RELUCTANCE/SORRY
Admitted
Apologized
Conceded
Confessed
Professed

FOR SOMEONE ELSE
Advised
Criticized
Suggested

JUST CHECKING
Affirmed
Agreed
Alleged
Confirmed

LOUD
Announced
Chanted
Crowed

LEWD/CUTE/SECRET SPY FEEL
Appealed
Disclosed
Moaned

ANGRY FUCK OFF MATE WANNA FIGHT
Argued
Barked
Challenged
Cursed
Fumed
Growled
Hissed
Roared
Swore

SMARTASS
Articulated
Asserted
Assured
Avowed
Claimed
Commanded
Cross-examined
Demanded
Digressed
Directed
Foretold
Instructed
Interrupted
Predicted
Proclaimed
Quoted
Theorized

ASSHOLE
Bellowed
Boasted
Bragged

NERVOUS TRAINWRECK
Babbled
Bawled
Mumbled
Sputtered
Stammered
Stuttered

SUAVE MOTHERFUCKER
Bargained
Divulged
Disclosed
Exhorted

FIRST OFF
Began

LASTLY
Concluded
Concurred

WEAK PUSY
Begged
Blurted
Complained
Cried
Faltered
Fretted

HAPPY/LOL
Cajoled
Exclaimed
Gushed
Jested
Joked
Laughed

WEIRDLY HAPPY/EXCITED
Extolled
Jabbered
Raved

BRUH, CHILL
Cautioned
Warned

ACTUALLY, YOU’RE WRONG
Chided
Contended
Corrected
Countered
Debated
Elaborated
Objected
Ranted
Retorted

CHILL SAVAGE
Commented
Continued
Observed
Surmised

LISTEN BUDDY
Enunciated
Explained
Elaborated
Hinted
Implied
Lectured
Reiterated
Recited
Reminded
Stressed

BRUH I NEED U AND U NEED ME
Confided
Offered
Urged

FINE
Consented
Decided

TOO EMO FULL OF EMOTIONS
Croaked
Lamented
Pledged
Sobbed
Sympathized
Wailed
Whimpered

JUST SAYING
Declared
Decreed
Mentioned
Noted
Pointed out
Postulated
Speculated
Stated
Told
Vouched

WASN’T ME
Denied
Lied

EVIL SMARTASS
Dictated
Equivocated
Ordered
Reprimanded
Threatened

BORED
Droned
Sighed

SHHHH IT’S QUIET TIME
Echoed
Mumbled
Murmured
Muttered
Uttered
Whispered

DRAMA QUEEN
Exaggerated
Panted
Pleaded
Prayed
Preached

OH SHIT
Gasped
Marveled
Screamed
Screeched
Shouted
Shrieked
Yelped
Yelled

ANNOYED
Grumbled
Grunted
Jeered
Quipped
Scolded
Snapped
Snarled
Sneered

ANNOYING
Nagged

I DON’T REALLY CARE BUT WHATEVER
Guessed
Ventured

I’M DRUNK OR JUST BEING WEIRDLY EXPRESSIVE FOR A POINT/SARCASM
Hooted
Howled
Yowled

I WONDER
Pondered
Voiced
Wondered

OH, YEAH, WHOOPS
Recalled
Recited
Remembered

SURPRISE BITCH
Revealed

IT SEEMS FAKE BUT OKAY/HA ACTUALLY FUNNY BUT I DON’T WANT TO LAUGH OUT LOUD
Scoffed
Snickered
Snorted

BITCHY
Tattled
Taunted
Teased

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Character Development: Appearance

riona-is-writing:

Your character’s appearance is pretty useful for a reader. This doesn’t just include hair and eye color, but accessories, how they view their own appearance, and body language. The character’s appearance helps your reader to not only visualize the character they’re reading about, but also to let them know something about the character. Here’s a list of the different components in a character’s appearance:

  • eyes (color, shape, emotion, etc.)
  • hair (color, style, wavy/curly/straight/etc., long/short)
  • skin (color, texture – like is it smooth, pockmarked, covered in spikes, etc.)
  • build (height, weight, muscle, type of body)
  • body language (how they stand/move)
  • clothing – normal (e.g. what they’d wear while out and about in public or in general)
  • clothing – dressed up (e.g. when they’re trying to be fancy)
  • clothing – comfortable (e.g. when they don’t care about what they look like, only comfort)
  • footwear/accessories (shoes, bags, hairthings, jewelry, tattoos, etc.)
  • how do they feel about their appearance (e.g. are they proud of it, ashamed, or just don’t care?)
  • how they see themselves vs how others see them (tied into the one above – like if they don’t care about their appearance and see their appearance as perfectly fine, but other people think that they don’t wear good clothes. In other words, how does your character’s appearance influence their interactions with others?)
  • items/things that they carry around with them or that appear with them that don’t really fit into the accessories category (e.g. Disney princesses and their animals, or the Log Lady and her log in Twin Peaks

Of course, not all of this information will appear in your writing (unless you’re working with visuals, like film or comics), but it’s good to keep in mind as the author.

When you do describe your character’s appearance in writing, remember:

SHOW, DON’T TELL.

I know, you’ve heard it all before, but it’s pretty important. 

For instance, if you have a tall character, instead of saying

He was tall.

say

He carried himself the way many tall people did – slightly bent down so that people could talk face-to-face with him.

or

He was always accidentally hitting his head on doorways that were too small for him, or on strings of lights at parties hung to accommodate people much shorter than him.

From these descriptions, the reader knows that not only is your character tall, but also how his height affects him and others around him – he’s courteous and tries not to loom over people, and his surroundings aren’t built with his height in mind, indicating that there aren’t many tall people where he lives.

By showing, not telling, you’ll be giving the reader more information about your character and in a way that develops character/the story.

However, there are times when you shouldn’t spend a lot of time on description. If it’s not important to your character or story, don’t feel bad if you say something very simply. And if your character isn’t the type to notice appearances that much, then it wouldn’t make sense for them to suddenly notice appearances with no explanation.

For example:

We have two characters noticing the same guy. The first character is a girl who loves art and poetry; the second character is a girl who likes math and science.

Character 1: “The stranger had deep blue eyes, like the depths of a still pond. I kept peeking at him all through second period, dying to pull my sketchbook out and start drawing.”

Character 2: “The stranger was good-looking, I guess – all the other girls were cooing over him in first period English today. I wasn’t really listening; problem number 87, part b, was a bit of a challenge.”

To the first character, description with colors and metaphors are important, and so it makes sense that she would describe the stranger this way. But to the second girl, who isn’t very poetic, it wouldn’t make sense, so all she would say is “he’s good-looking and the other girls like him,” and the reader can fill in the blanks.

In conclusion, remember:

  • not all of your character’s appearance is going to make it into the story
  • try to show, not tell

Something I struggle with, these are nice tips. Thank you!

How to Outline: For Beginners to Writing Veterans

fictionwritingtips:

Let me start out by
defining a few things:

Pantsers

These types of writers generally plan out very little before
diving into their novels. They might have some ideas, maybe a small outline,
but they feel free to take their story in any direction they please. The lack
of outlining and planning lends itself to untethered creativity.

Plotters

These types of writers usually have some sort of outline
that they follow while writing their novel. They spend some time planning and
rewriting their outlines and know what’s going to happen (to an extent).
Usually the novel is planned out before they begin writing it, which cuts out
the element of surprise for the writer and tends to reduce writer’s block.

There’s no right way to be, but personally I’m a plotter. I
probably plot too much. If you’re a
pantser and it’s working for you, keep doing it!
More power to ya!

However, if you’re
looking to experiment with plotting or you just want to learn how to do it,
check out these tips below:

Where to Begin:

Skeleton Outline

If you’re looking for a little bit of direction, but don’t
feel like/find it necessary to build a huge outline, this is probably what you’re
going for. Create an outline that focuses around the main points of your story.

Detailed Outline

A detailed outline usually builds on what you did for the
skeleton outline. This adds more detail to the structure of your story and
helps focus on fleshing out what’s going to happen throughout the novel. I
usually add in some sections about my characters and any sort of world building
I might do.

Chapter-by-Chapter
Outline

This is literally when you plan out each chapter of your
novel. Some might find it unnecessary to get that detailed, but if you have
pacing problems or want to cut down on extensive editing, this might work best
for you.

How to:

Skeleton Outline

This is essentially the “road map” of your story. Figure out
what the conflict is and focus on the beginning, middle, and sometimes the end (a lot of writers aren’t
completely sure what their ending will be, but sometimes it helps to have to
planned out so you can effectively lead up to it in the story. It could also
help with tone issues. Example—if you ending is dark, you might want to set up
the audience for that).

For a skeleton outline it helps to focus on story arcs. For
example,

·        
Stasis

·        
Trigger

·        
The Quest

·        
Surprise

·        
Critical Choice

·        
Climax

·        
Reversal

·        
Resolution

Learn more about story arcs here: http://www.dailywritingtips.com/how-to-structure-a-story-the-eight-point-arc/

Filling out those story points will help you build a more
detailed outline if you choose to do so and will help you focus your story, so
it’s not all over the place. If you want to have a clear idea where you’re
headed, but don’t want to bog yourself down with the details, a skeleton
outline might be best for you.

Detailed Outline

For a detailed outline, you basically just take your
skeleton outline and flesh it out. Add to each section of the story arc and
drop in more detail. Focus on what scenes will help you get across each main
story point.

For example:

Stasis – Amy lives
with her mother and her sister in a house that’s nearly falling apart. She’s
unhappy with her life and her family doesn’t treat her well.

This is Amy’s everyday life, but you can do more to plan it
out before jumping into writing. What’s Amy’s home life like? What does her
family do to treat her poorly? What scenes will you explore to show the
audience what’s going on.

Maybe Amy’s sister teases her or makes her do all the
chores. Maybe Amy’s mom often doesn’t come home or doesn’t take care of her
children. Explore these ideas and use them to flesh out your outline. Then, you’ll
have some idea what to write when the time comes, instead of just something
vague. This could also help you cut down on telling instead of showing.

Chapter-by-Chapter
Outline

This takes a lot of time, but from experience, it does help
cut down on the editing process, AND it helps you write a synopsis and query
letter when or if the time comes. I spent around a month writing my last
chapter-by-chapter outline, so I know exactly what I’m going to do when I start
writing. I prefer this because I know I won’t get stuck and I’ll be able to get
through the draft quickly. If you like to write fast, which I do because I like
to keep my excitement for my project up when I’m writing, a chapter-by-chapter
outline might work for you.

A chapter-by-chapter outline might be difficult for your
first time writing a novel because you might not know how long it should be or
what your strengths and weaknesses are as a writer. There’s no right answer for
how long a chapter-by-chapter outline should be because only you know how long
your chapters usually are or if you have any problems with word count (Is your
novel usually too long? Too short?).

Anyway, if you feel like you want to do a chapter-by-chapter
outline, I usually do something like this for each chapter:

Chapter 1:

Paragraph or more about what’s happening in the chapter.
Think about each chapter as its own tiny story. Each chapter should have a
beginning, middle, and end, and should lend itself to the overall story. Think
about what the purpose is for each chapter and what information you want to
convey to the reader.

Conflict (I tend
to write a sentence about what the conflict is in each chapter. If I can’t find
any, I know that’s a sign I need to rewrite that section of the outline. There
should always be conflict! There should always be something driving the plot
forward!)

I also suggest letting your chapter-by-chapter outline sit
for a week or so and editing it. I know that sounds like a lot of work, but
that will help your catch any plotting, pacing, or conflict problems BEFORE you
start writing. If you’re a planner, this will help tremendously.

Additional Notes:

Obviously, some people like editing. They feel that’s when
their story really comes together and they love that aspect of it. They like
tearing their story apart, starting over, and building something new. That’s
perfectly okay! You don’t need to have a detailed outline if that doesn’t work
for you.

The reason I focus on planning is because I can look at the
bigger picture before I start the draft. I have a clear focus and I know what’s
coming next.

Also, there are plenty
of ways to write an outline. How I do it isn’t necessarily right, it just works
for me. Experiment with it until you find something that makes you feel
comfortable.

What I’m really saying is:

There are no rules
for writing. Whatever feels right or whatever makes you happy is what you
should focus on. If you don’t want an outline, don’t write one. If you’ve been
having trouble with writer’s block or the editing process, maybe try it out!
Figure out what’s right for you!

Lots of good tips here!

Resources For Writing Sketchy Topics

bluestockingbookworm:

verkoh:

wordsnstuff:

Medicine

Writing Specific Characters

Illegal Activity

Black Market Prices & Profits

Forensics

@forever-afk @ive-been-to-redwall

Writing resource

Resources

What are some tips to write fanfics? And how do we keep our motivation going so that we don’t get bored of writing?

sportanimefantasies:

5hfanfiction:

1) Motivation should begin and end with you, the author. What does this mean exactly? It means choosing a plot that drives your creativity and setting up characters as pawns in your quest for personal entertainment. If you’re excited about learning what is going to happen next in the world you’re envisioning, then so too a pack of readers with similar interests will follow. Don’t let your satisfaction with your work be dictated by the audience (counting notes, comments, views, etc). Write something you could love just as much even if it was locked away in a notebook nobody else was ever going to read. 

2) Talk to other authors. Everyone gets stuck sometimes. Having someone to bounce ideas off of or vent to when you’re losing interest in your work has the potential to renew the spark. 

3) Plan in advance. The more of your story you have outlined, the better the odds you’ll commit from start to finish. A good old-fashioned brainstorm can go a long way in the long term when inspiration for a new idea first strikes. It’s a lot more challenging to build a path to a destination that’s completely unknown. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve abandoned a story because I had no clue where I was going with it or why I had started writing it in the first place. Do as I say, not as I do. 

4) Get a beta reader. If you don’t have much experience writing then there is no shortage of experienced writers out there who are willing to help proofread and offer suggestions where welcomed. Never let format or grammar errors be the reason an amazing piece of your artistic vision gets dismissed. 

5) Drabble away. Take a break from a series you’re writing and let yourself rant out something completely different. You don’t even need to publish it. Just get your mind out of one setting and throw yourself into another land for a while. If it turns into a one shot, great. If it ends up in the recycling, move on.  

6) Observe other fandom art. Watch YouTube videos. Look at graphic manips. Read other fanfics. Remind yourself what drives your fanaticism and how you got here. Refresh your fan energy and come back to writing with your interest back on the rise and renewed. 

7) Know your limits. If you come to a point where other priorities need to be observed, live your life first. Fanfiction is a wonderful outlet but can also be very time consuming for an activity that comes without financial compensation. There may be spiritual or emotional rewards to the experience, but it’s not going to complete your degree for you, put food on the table, fold your laundry, nor pay your internet bill. Sometimes what’s mistaken for “boredom” with a story is actually the feeling of being overwhelmed about sacrificing a certain chunk of time to write when you’re juggling several other responsibilities. If the story doesn’t help address any of these stresses, it may add to them instead. If writing is no longer benefiting you, let yourself be okay with taking a step back for a while.   

  /EndRant

– Liz aka Yunogiveitup 

for any other writers that need this!

I needed the first one as a reminder.