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do you have tips on how to write characters? knb for example, has lots of different characters with different personalities so how do you write them as “them”, you know, so as to capture their individual traits and such? i’m having a hard time trying to get into their pov so when I write each of them they’re like all the same, or more like they’re like ME instead of “them” err sorry if it’s confusing haha. thanks for ur time

Sorry it took me a while to get back to you, I’ve been dealing with back pain all weekend and have been in bed most of that time. 

It’s not confusing at all, I totally get what you mean and thank you for asking, I’m flattered you think I’m a good source of information for something like this since I, too, struggle with getting “my” voice out of their mouths lol. 

First things first, something like this takes practice and patience. Writing something, reading it over, visualizing them saying what you wrote, and adjusting as needed. 

Consider their word choices. It’s a little challenging sometimes because as with most anime we’re watching a translation (I’m presuming, unless you can understand the native tongue it was broadcast in) but assuming you’re watching subtitles you’re getting the gist of their word choice. 

Such as, Midorima and Akashi speak more “proper” this conveys their intelligence, self control, seriousness, power, etc. 

Aomine and Murasakibara are more casual speakers, they’d be more likely to use slang or sharp speak. 

Kise is a bit harder because there are two schools of thought: anime version and manga version. I’ve never read the manga but I have read about his characterization in it and he’s…less bubbly and more cold. But you can do both to show his dual nature. It actually can make him an even more interesting character and not just “the dumb blonde”. 

Think about how they communicate in terms of tone inflection, pace, facial expressions, gestures. All of these things help bring them to life on the page. 

You don’t have to necessarily do all of this while you’re writing the scene. Get your ideas out on the page so you don’t lose them and then go back and tone it properly for the characters. 

I hope that makes sense and is helpful, please feel free to ask more questions or for clarification if needed and thanks again for flattering me by asking MY advice on character writing!

M and W for Mitobe???

These are more sweet, than sexy, I hope you enjoy!

M: Morning (Describe morning sex)

  • Mitobe comes from a large household where he often would be one of the first ones up to help his mom and dad with the rest of his siblings.
  • So don’t be surprised to find him awake, half asleep making enough food to feed an army.
  • Gently take him back to bed (making sure to leave nothing to burn) and reward him for his sweet gesture (ingrained as it may be) with slow, long kisses and roaming hands.
  • Allow him to take control since for so long even though he was the eldest of his family’s offspring, it often meant her catered to everyone else’s needs/whims
  • Things may stay slow but they’ll be sweet, his lips constantly moving over your skin and his hands eager to please
  • He’ll want to be on top, controlling the level of penetration; turning out to be a bit of a tease
  • But he’ll give in quickly to your whimpers, giving you exactly what you want and getting what he wants at the same time
  • After a few rounds, with sleepy cuddles in between, go back to the kitchen to finish making breakfast together, maybe calling some of the Seirin boys to make Mitobe feel more at home with a chaos filled room.

W: Wedding Night (Consummating the marriage)

  • Used to loud, chaos (which inevitably the wedding would end up given the guest list and that’s merely considering his family) Mitobe will want to spend the first hour or so just revelling in the quiet of you and him.
  • If you need assistance, he’ll help you get your dress off, but will leave the bathroom to allow you to remove the heavy makeup and hairspray from the day. He thinks you look beautiful but wants you more comfortable before things heat up, so if you need to take a shower, go ahead, you can always take another one together later on.
  • He’ll slip out of his tux into one of the hotel bathrobes and prepare a post wedding snack with things he brought in a cooler (boy is always prepared).
  • After enjoying the surprise of cheese, meats, crackers, chocolate covered strawberries, and white wine on the balcony, he’ll let you back to the bedroom.
  • If you have special lingerie, he’ll leave you to put it on, waiting with a pounding but excited heart as you exit in all your sexy glory.
  • Having always put others first, Mitobe will be all about making sure you’re comfortable with everything that’s happening.
  • He’ll kiss you thoroughly, hands touching you with a reverence born of pure adoration because you’re his completely now.
  • The actual act of sex is slow and sensual, both of you taking your time to become one in every sense of the word.
  • Afterwards, he’ll hold you close, watching you sleep and thanking his lucky stars to have been given such a gift in you.

Hi Kageyama! How are you? Are you eating properly? Do you get enough sleep? I love you so much so you better take care of yourself! ~blueberry anon

My first anon with an ID! Welcome blueberry anon!

Kageyama looks a little overwhelmed with all your attention but finally manages to crack a smile. 

“What kind of look is that Kageyama?” Hinata asks with a shudder. 

“Yeah, you look like you have to go to the bathroom or something,” Tsukki chimes in. 

“Sh…shut up idiots!” shouts the blue eyed setter. Turning back to you, he bows. “Thank you for your concern, I’ll make sure to take care of myself so as not to worry you!”